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 ## 👨‍💻 About Me
 
-### I’m a developer who enjoys **building software**, working with **data-driven systems**, and understanding **why things work the way they do**.  
+### I love **building things**, working with **data**, and understanding **why things work the way they do**.  
 
 
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 - Self-hosted applications
 - Backend-focused tools and services
-- Data-aware projects (ETL, modeling, pipelines)
+- Data projects (ETL, modeling, pipelines)
 - Ongoing learning in Java, Python, and system design